Khalid
Mere wajood mein wafa ki roshni utaar de
Phir itna pyar de ke mujhe chahton mein maar de
Bahaut udaas tha to uth kar tere paas aagaya
Kuch aisi baat kar jo dil ko chain de qaraar de
Suna hai teri ik nazar sanwaarti hai zindagi
Jo ho sake to aaj meri zindagi sanwaar de!(mkm)
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lovely khalid ur lazawaab nice one
Siddharth ji
Sab se pehle to yeh kahoonga ke main
khud bhi sach bolta hoon aur mujhe
sach bolne wale bahaut ache lagte
hain.Aur jo sach nahin bolte woh mere
dost nahin ho sakte !!!
Mera ishara aap samjh gaye honge.
Khair rahi baat is line ko pura karne
ki to,yeh line yahan pe honi hi nahin
chahye.Yeh shayari “jis” ne bhi likhi
hai is ka koi wazan twazan ka koi khyal
nahin rakha.
Haan line bahaut hi khoobsurat hai lekan
yahan fit nahin hoti is ko mukamaal
kuchh aise bhi kiya ja sakta hai….
“Yaad aati ho is qadar se tum
Din raat ab yaadon ka hi daira hai”
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Khalid sir, ye kuch amine b likha hai, par poora nahi kar pa raha hoo,, kya aap isay mere liye pura kar denge??
Aaj waadee main khoob koharaa hai ,
Dil akelaa hai dard doharaa hai.
Tere kaano.n ko hi nahin pahunchi,
Baat jiskaa ki yoon dhindoraa hai.
Aasmaanon se khelataa hai woh,
Aadmi kya hai ek mohara hai .
Dher sara nahin hai to naa sahi ,
Yeh to kah do ki pyaar thodaa hai.
Yaad aati ho is Qadr se tum ,
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baharo se gul pyar karte hai hum khawo se pyar karte hai in husn walo ka kya thikana yeh to hajaro se pyar karte hai humne dekha inko kabootro ki nals main kabhi iske bagal main kabhi uske bagal main
Hi Shantanu
Thank you so much for your lovely
comment.Bahaut khoob likha hai tum
ne.Welldone!!
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hi…mr.khalid…
i dnt no very much abt poetrys…bt apke tarif k liye…
bus ek 2 hai jo samje mere haal ko…
duniya shayad tukra de mere sawal ko…
teri har nawazish ka shukar hai…
koi gair kya samjega hal e dil ko…
manjur hai har sitam tera mujhe…
jo jara madat karde 2 rah chalne ko…
chahe kuch mohlat mili mjhe jine ki aur
bahon main tere muskurate gale lagalu maut ko………….
m inspired by u….
Suna hai teri ik nazar sanwaarti hai zindagi
Jo ho sake to aaj meri zindagi sanwaar de
great.
Mere wajood mein wafa ki roshni utaar de
Phir itna pyar de ke mujhe chahton mein maar de.
Aap ke shayari bahot achche hain.jahan bhi rahe aap khush rahe.ye Hum dono husband & wife ki dua hai.
Hi Nafisa
Hi Jeetu
Thank you so much for your appreciation
of this post.Bahaut khushi hoti hai yeh
sare comments padh kar ke jo main post
karta hoon usse koi padhta bhi hai.So
nice of you to write.
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MR.KHALID MAIN AAPKE BARE MEIN KYA KAHU K AAP KITNA AACHA LIKHTE HO MERE PAAS ALFAZ HI KHATAM HO JATE HAIN AAPKI SHYERI K LIYE .AAP ITNA AACHA LIKHTE HO.I LIKE YOUR SHYERI
as sallam u alaikumwrwb
khalid shahab bas dua niklati yeh hai pake shair pardhkar k ALLAHTALLAH apki har ek jaiz arzu pura karen bohat khoob hai apke shairs n maine mail kiya hai apko dekhlena
take care ALALHAHFIZ
Hi Akansha
Yes ofcourse i would like to be
your friend.Iss mein plzzz wagaira
kehne ki konsi baat hai dost.Yeh
shayari tumein acchi lagi is ka
bahaut bahaut shukriya.Bas apne
khayalon se agah karti rehna!!!
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bahut accha likhte ho aap………..
main lafzo main baya nai kr skti itna………
would u like 2 be my frd????
plzzzzzzz be my frd………..
Hi Umesh
Thank you dost apni rai dene ka.
Doosron ka dard bahaut kam log
samjhte hain. I am very greatfull.
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hi khalid teri dil ke dard ko mai samzah sakta hu kyki mai bhi to ishi dard mai ge raha hu yaar.
Soni
Gani
Thank you both for your comments.
I will do my best to post some more
shayari to your liking!
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Hi,Khalid.
nice shayri,plz or achi shayri likhna.
take care
good
Hi Amarjeet
As allways never missing out on giving
your thoughts on all of my posts. Dost,
thank you so much! Iam very greatfull
for this.
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Hi Khalid,
Wow……
this is really lovely shayari…..
really liked it…..
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