Khalid
Tum hi se mera chaand khilay
Tum hi se chandni milay
Tum hi se chandni milay
Tum hi se subaah ho meri
Tum hi se meri sham dhalay
Tum hi se mehkay her kali
Tum hi se her phool khilay
Tum hi to apnay ho meray
Tum hi se hain sub gilay
Tum hi to chahat ho meri
Tum hi se mera dil milay
Tum hi se zindagi hai meri
Tum hi se hain yeh silsilay
Jab tujh hi se mujhay sub kuch milay
Phir kiyon na mujh ko tum milay?(mkm)
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Comments 33
Hi Nikita
Thank you so much for your comment
dost.You took the trouble of writing
again i really appreciate it !!!
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khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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hi dost
i like ur poem
nd i loved it
Khalid kya aapki tasveer mil sakti hain mujhe?
Sapna
Thank you,thank you thank you so
much my friend for your duas.
Bas aap doston ka pyar mere sath
hai,aur mujhe kya chahye?
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Hi Khalid,
Very sensational poem… loved it…
Yahi ek dua hain khuda se, ki aapka pyaar aapko mil jaye…
hi friend
Shilpa
Shukriya dost itni sari duaein dene
ka. Umeed karta hoon ke duaon mein
aainda bhi yaad rakho gi aur is site
ko visit karti raho gi !!!
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aap bahut acha likhte hain
main dua karungi ki aap hamesha aise hi likhte rahen or aapki kalam ki seayahi kabhi na sukhe
Hi Nikita
Thank you for your comment dost
lekan kis cheez ki photgraphs
chahye? Yeh to tum ne bataya hi
nahin !!
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khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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pls send me photographes
Salaam Sara
Shukriya dost.Yeh to bahaut sari
tareef kar dee aisi bhi to koi
baat nahin.
Bahar hall khushi hui ke tumein
pasand aai.
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Hi Khalid……..
its just awesum yaar….aap bht acche poems likhte hain….its just superbbbbbb…….gud job….
keep it up……
Sharad
My friend thanks a lot for your thoughts
Dene waale ne to koi kammi nahin ki,ab
kis ko kya mila yeh muqaddar ki baat hai!
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khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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kay baat hai apane dil se likhane walahi aisi baatein karta hai unlucky that girl jo tumari felling nahi samji
Ahmad
My dear friend pyar koi sauda nahin
jis mein haar ya jeet ki baat ho.Woh
kehte hain na ke…….
Maqtabe ishq ka dastoor niraala dekha
Us ko chutti na mili jis ne sabak yaad kiya!
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khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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Kuldeep Rathore
Mere dost koi jaan bhoojh kar thora
hi dhoobta hai?Yeh to apni apni kismat
ki baat hai.
Thank you so much for your comment!
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Hi Amarjeet
Kaisi ho meri dost? Haan yeh sach
hai ke kuch sawaal zindagi mein
adhoore hi reh jaate hain. Un ka
jawaab de bhi to kaun? Shukriya dost
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khalid.m@hotmail.co.uk
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jab payar ma koi jeet kar b haar jata ha tu aisi feelings hi hoti ha.duniya ka dusutura hi aisa ha koi payar me kisi ko jene hi nahi deta
kya baat hai dard mein itna kyon dub gaye. ki upar uthne ka moka hi nahi mila.
Hi Khalid…..
Feelings…..very well expressed…
Jab tujh hi se mujhay sub kuch milay
Phir kiyon na mujh ko tum milay?(mkm)
Very nice…
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