Khalid
Ashk beh jaate hain aksar sabhi ki aankhon se,
Main to un ki yaad mein ashkon mein beh gya.
Dost bhi badal gaye ab tere jaane ke baad,
Bas akela main tanhayon ke saath reh gya.
Tere aane ka intezaar ab bhi hai in aankhon ko,
Woh tera hasna tasveer ban kar hi reh gya.
Diya baadlon ne mera saath ta-umar yun hi,
Kabhi roya baras ke to kabhi garaj ke kuch keh gya.
Ashk beh jaate hain aksar sabhi ki aankhon se,
Main to un ki yaad mein ashkon mein beh gya.(mkm)
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khalid jee aap ka koi javab nhi main jb bhi msg karne ke liye type karta hoon to na jane kyon me bus aapke hi msg ko padta hoon reyley aapke msg is very good
shyam raj puri
Bahaut bahaut shukriya mere dost.Bahaut khushi
hui ye jaan kar ke aap ko meri posts bahaut pasand
aati hain.
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Hi Sapna
Thank you so much for your comment.
Dar asal jis ke paas dard hota hai woh
hi aisi lines ko samajh sakta hai.Meri har
ik shayari har kisi ko lagta hai ke yeh un ki
zindagi par he likhi gai hai.
Ye bas apni apni samajh ki baat hai !!
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khalid… itni ghehrie main kese ja ke shiry kr leyte hain app.. i mean k appki shiry dil ko chu jati hy.. keep it upp.. 🙂
please meyre liye koi special shiry likhain gey app??
Assalaam alaikum ?
Priya
Thank you so much Priya for your woonderfull
words of encourgement.Bahaut acha laga yeh jaan
kar keh yeh shayari tumein pasand aay hai.
Asal mein cheez wohi achi lagti hai jo dil tak
paunche.Aur lagta hai main is mein kamyaab ho
gya hoon.Thank you once again!!!
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hiii …khalid its really gud lines …..ki intazaar aaj bhi hai…its really gud …aur toh main kuch keh nhi sakti bt…ye padhke aisa lagta hai ki ki ye line ye shayri mere liye hai….SACH ME MAZA AA GYA….THANX ONCE AGAIN
Rajni Nayyar
My friend,i dont know how to thank
you for such understanding.I am very
greatfull!!!
Koi peeta hai ashq,koi bahata hai ashq,
Yeh apne apne zarf e mohabbat ki baat hai.
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khalid jee,jo dard ko kareeb se mahsus kara ho wo samjh sakta hai dard aur iski geharaai ko,maine aapke har shayari me ek dard ko mehsus kiya hai.
koi dard ko ashkon ke katare me baha jaate hain,koi dard ko aankhon me chhupa jaate hain,par hota to dono me dard ka samna,ek
bah kar nikal jaate hain,ek sukh kar aankhon me rah jaate hain.
Hi Sneha
Thank you so much for your appreciation
Sneha.Rahi baat shayari dost ko behjhne
ki do meri acchi si dost sab kehte hain
ke meri har post mein dard nazar aata hai
to in mein se koi bhi behjh do yaqeenan
tumhare dost ko pasand aaye gi.
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khalid aapki shayri bahut badiya lagi aap mere liye ek dard bhri shayri likhna jo meine aapne dost ko bhejni hai jo ki mujse khafa hai pleeeeeeeeeeeeeee likhna jarur
W/salaam Sweet
Kaisi ho meri dost? Kaafi dinno ke
baad nazar aay ho Allah kare sabh
khairiyat ho !
Koi kaam bhi ho jab tak usse dil laga
kar na kiya jaye woh theek nahin ho pata.
Bahr hall bahaut khushi hui tumein yahan
dekh kar.
Mujhe pata hai ke bahaut saari majbooriyan
hain lekan phir bhi request
karoonga ke kam az kam apni khairiyat
ki khabar de jaaya karo!!!
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Salam
Arey Khalid Ji aap to celebrity bange ho lol achi baat hai…waise aap ki shayari main aap ka dil ka haal hota hoga isi liye to itni achi hoti hain….keep it up take care
Allahafiz Sweet
Neha
My dear neice Neha,tumhara itna pyara
comment padh kar dil ko bahaut hi khushi
hui. Aur tum ne poocha hai ke yeh shayari
kahan se aa jati hai to my dear yeh sab
aap logon ka pyar hai jo itni achhi shayari
post karne par majboor kar deta hai.
Yeh tumhare liye hai umeed karta hoon ke
pasand aaye gi!!!
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Sada door raho gham ki parchhaiyon se
Saamna na ho kabhi tanhaayon se
Her armaan,her khuwaab poora ho tumhara
Yahi dua hai dil ki ghehraayon se
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